Wednesday, June 29, 2005

a paradise.

my imagination,
cannot rein it in.
yielding to the inevitable,
i let it roam free,
bounding across the undulating slopes,
and the fertile plains of my mind,
unfettered and true,
lambent and forceful, both at once,
giving shape,
to what dreams may,
oh, sheer joy !

4 comments:

silverine said...

Oh sheer joy this poem is truly
letting ur imagination run free
from those bonded thoughts
towards a life so carefree...:))


another nice one (sigh)and forgive my sad attempt at poetry! I was carried away! :(

Jake said...

there is no sad, no bad, no good. there only 'is'. harmony and peace reign, the ying chases the yang chases the ying ...blah :-P

well atleast someone liked it. while others kindly informed me that bcos 'it' ran all over the place, quite noisily, they chose to remain silent.

chastised the jedi returned to watching the ying and the yang in their eternal dance.

right. end of yarn spinning 101.

M said...

Let your mind rip!

Jake said...

eeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

its rippin, rippin.